Rosario García Chamizo 3ºESO-C

My name's Rosario and i'm fourteen years old.I live in Puebla de la Calzada with my mother and my brother and sister.I go to Ies Enrique Diez-Canedo secondary school.
I want to learn very (many) lenguages but (the) first (one) i want  (to) learn is korean with my sister and I want to travel a lot I think that is my dream because you can meet new people and new culture(s) so I think that's great.I want (to) go to university but no (not) in spain (Spain) in other site (a different place) maybe london or why not korea I can get a job there i don't know. I think  (it) is great (to) dream about the future. I want to study something about cameras and all that because I think it's great take (taking) photos and I want to do videos about what I learn about the word.My hobbies are music and see korean programmes. (It) is really cool is verry funny all of then (all of them are very funny) .My favourite groups in k-pop are twice,red velvet,bts,big bang,black pink....Well Goodbye thanks (for) to read  (reading) my personal profile.

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