PABLO VÉLIZ 1º A

                                                    MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM 

       This is my virtual bedroom, it´s very confortable 

       and big.

       There is a bed, it´s very big and (by) to the sides (there are) are 

       two lamps. There is a balcony and curtains; in the

       balcony there are two chairs and a table.

       There is a table,a lamp and a picture

Ok. 7
Next time try to write more.

MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM

Hello!My name is Ángel Pereira.This is my virtual bedroom. There is a red bed next to the table. In (on) the table there is a laptop. There are (is) a chair and three orange and grey drawers. There is an orange and black wardrobe near the bed. I love my virtual bedroom. It's great!

Ok. 7
Write more next time!

PIJAMA PARTY

The last saturday my friends and me did a pijama party in my house. They arrives (arrived) at 9 pm at my house. We don't (didn't) sleep  (at all) in all the night. We eat  (ate) candies, and we drinks (drank) non-alcohol shots. I played some music.

Later I take (took) the old trunk out of my disguises and we all disguise (disguised)  ourselves, each one of what he wanted.

We played different games, we had a great time.

I remember that a friend entangled (looked into) in one of the drawers of my bedside table found old photos of when we were just girls.

When arriving the morning (At dawn) my mother taught us to make cupcakes whith the recipe that my aunt gave her for her birthday, they were delicious, it was a great breakfast.

Finally we picked and fixed the room all together.

When the mothers of my friends arrived to collect them, it ended the party. We were returning a response the party another day (we wanted to have another party any other day???)

Very well done, but please MIND VERBS IN THE PAST.   7

WHO ARE YOU, BY THE WAY?

 

Abril Nieto García

Elena Donaire 1ºB "MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM"

Hello. My name´s Elena. This is my bedroom. My bedroom is big and organized. I havegot (a) big bed and a desk where I do my homeworks. There are two bookcares (bookshelves) where I put my favourite books. The walls are white and violet, (I) like all my things in my clothes. I´m (spend) there a lot of time.
I love it!
Homework is an uncountable noun, so it has no plural. ok? 
Very well done 8.

                        An event

 Hello, my name is Alejandro.

The other day I was in the solidarity race held every year in Barbaño. We participate many people (TOOK PLACE), specifically 200 people. We went around the village, ate fruit and drank water and then played games and danced zumba. Finally we (ALL THE PEOPLE TAKING PART) ate paella all that participated in the event. We all had a great time and raffled a bike (A BIKE WAS RAFFLED).

WELL DONE 7

  MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM

 Hello my name is Nazaret. My virtual bedroom is very  big and beautifual (beautiful) .My bedroom has one big bed, one wardrobe where i keep my clothes.There are (is) (a) (bedide table) side table next to my bed with a lamp .

There is a big window with views (of) the garden. (It) Is fantastic. (It) Has a (huge) gigantisc  table where i do my homework , (it) also has longs shelves where there are a lots of tnig (things).I like my bedroom because (it) has my favourite colors.


NAZARET ÀLVAREZ  (ÁLVAREZ) SÁNCHEZ

Well done, 7, 
Remember we have to use the subject in English ALWAYS. The adjective and the noun don't agree in number!!: long shelves, red cars, big houses...

 Hi! My name is Nacho,I live in puebla de la calzada province of badajoz,I am fourteen years old.  in my spare time. I like to play sports, to play, to play football, I also like to play, to play station 4, specifically to fifa 17.
This is not enough, Nacho. You have to write MORE.  5

ELENA 2 C THE EVENT

Last weekend, it was my birthay (birthday). To celebrate , I went to a concert with my friends. I love the concerts because, (it was a Sofia Carson concert) the concert was Sofia Carson. I was surprised because, Sofia Carson was very positive. The concert finished at 8 p.m. I was surprised but relaxed because , I love Sofia Carson.

Ok. But write more netx time and upload photos.  6

Laura Arribas Arredondo 1º ESO B

                                                 

  MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM

   SORRY I HAD TO ERASE YOUR PHOTO BECAUSE IT WAS MAKEING THE BLOG FAIL. 

                                                     

           Hello! My name is Laura and here is my virtual bedroom. It´s very big and beautiful.

          In my room, the walls are papered (with) yellow and purple (wall paper).There is a white desk where I do my homework. On my desk,there is a lamp and a photo.                    In front (of) the desk there is a very big window. The views are fantastic. Near the desk, there is a plant.

          I have a confortable bed with drawers,  next to the bed, there is a wardrobe where I keep my clothes and at the top of the bed, there are some shelves where I have my favourites books and many adornments (things).

          My bedroom is confortable to study and to listen to music. 

          I love my room!

Very well done. 9

AN EVENT CARLOS 2 B

                                           

                                    AN  EVENT                                                                                                                                                  
  Hello, my name is Carlos.
 My best holidays were in Granada, a city in Spain, a beautiful city with a very good climate (weather).
 I went with my parents and my sister by car and it took 5 hours to arrive.
 We stayed in a house near the beach, the house was small, but I had a very large garden with swimming pool.

 It was a sunny weather, perfect for the beach or swimming pool.

 On the beach there were many water attractions.

 It was a fantastic holiday.

Very well done.   9
nect time, plkease upload some photos. 

                                                           
                                                               The best concert!

                  Delia Jiménez Barrena 2º ESO A

Last summer, I went to a Pablo Alborán's concert with my parents, my cousin and her friends. It was one Friday of August. 
I was very excited and happy. I sang and danced a lot. I loved all of the songs and his dances.
The concert finished at 2.00 a.m. I was more excited than at the beginning but sad because the concert was over.
I enjoyed a lot because he sings very good and I had fun with my family.

Very well done   9
Next time ,please upload photos to make it nicer.

THE SCOUT PARTY

                                       The Scout Party

 [ IRENE GONZÁLEZ PÉREZ, 2 ESO B]

 

The scout party, was the 23th of octobre (october) of 2015 in Puebla de la Calzada, the party had a bar, dances, games and a lot of music, the party was very funny, but it was rain (raining), we organized the party and we preparated (prepared) the dances and the music. The school of dance of Puebla de la Calzada, dance (danced) at the party, a lot (of) scouts play (played) in the party, they sang, they dance (danced), they did a lot of things...
Well done.  8

 

My Personal Profile (Pedro José 3ºC)

Hi!! My name is Pedro José and I'm nineteen. I'm from Lobón a little town near to Badajoz. I live in Badajoz because I'm studing here. I like the photograpie , listening music , swimming and watching TV series and films.

I want (to) travel to NYC and California when I finish my studies. I want to (go to California) CA because I like her beaches and turristic places. I want (to) see Central Park, (the) Empire State Building and Brookling in NYC.

I like listen (listening to)  Rap and Pop music. My favourit TV series are Gossip Girl, House of Cards, Scream Queens, Modern Fmily and The big Ban Theory. I always eat popcorns when I watch films. ( It's a (an) obsession)

My favourite social networks are Twitter, Youtube, and We Heart It because it's a photography's social network. You can follow me in my social networks and we can see us soon
Very well done. 9

Carmen Ferna(á)ndez Nogales

   MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM

Hello, my name is Carmen, and this is my virtual bedroom. It´s big and welcoming. There are some colours. There is a window.
In my room, there is a medium (side) bed and there is a wardrobe. 
I haven´t got a TV in my room, but I´ve got a chair and a clock.
My favourite thing in the room is my bed and wardrobe. 
I love it.
Well done. 8

Zayra Escobar Germán 1ºB:

My vartual bedroom

This is my virtual bedroom ,I have a white desk,a bed,a wardrobe...Here I usually and do homework.

my free time I spend here (I spend my free time here),organizing and choosing clothes.

I hope you like them.

Ok. 7

Sheila Holguín Fernández 1º:

My virtual beedroom

My name is Sheila,This is my virtual bedroom,It´s pretty,

There is a white table whit (with) colored drawers,I have a window next to the table,I have got flowers on my table,I have got books,I do my homeworks (homework) and study in this room. 
Ok. 7 
Remember that adjective and noun do not agree in number.

(Ana Barroso 3ºC)

          My name is Ana I'm fourteen years old. I live in Barbaño whit (with) my parend  (parents) and my brother and my dog  but I (am) from Madrid. I study at Enrique Diez Canedo Secondary School and my favourite subjet is PI.
          I like listen (listening to) to music, my favourite groups are ACDC (lie) but  eating candies is´s my favourite hobbie. I (do) practing Taekwondo in SEVEN gym whit  (with) my friends and my (brother). (My...) brother´s name Angel.

Ok 6

Next time upload some photos to make it look nicer.

My Personal Profile - Elena 3ºC

    Hi! My name is Elena and I'm fourteen years old. I live in Puebla de la Calzada with my parents and my old sister. I study at Enrique Diez Canedo high school and my favourite subject is Art.

  I REALLY like drawing and painting while I listen to music, it's my favourite hobbie. I like listen (listening)  to Rock, Alternative Rock, Rap, Punk and Hip-Hop but I rarely listen to Pop. My favourite bands are twenty one pilots and My Chemical Romance, and my favourites singers are The Weeknd and Bruno Mars.

I'm looking for a good friend to talk about freak stuff, art, games... It does't matter if you are girl or a boy, but if you are a boy....it's better lol. I'm going to visit this chat room on (at)  the weekends.

 See ya'!

  Excellent  9
Some photos would also be great! (;-)

                                                   My personal profile

My name is Raúl and I'm sixteen years old.I live in Barbaño with my parents, my sister (her name's Sara) she's name Sara and my two dogs he's name Yaki and Tyson (their name are...) .I go to Enrique Diez Canedo secundary school.

My hobbies are football and music.I listen to music in my  bedroom lying in (on) my bed,I play football in Montijo in E.F Peña el Valle with my friends.

Ok. 7
next time upload some photos, please.

My virtual bedroom have (has) got two windows and a bed nex (next) to one of the windows,there are (is) a table in front of the bed.The bed is red and blue.In the table there is a laptop.Near the bed there is a wardrobe .Nex (next) to the table there is a chair and under there is a dog's home and over there is a verey (very) small table with a television.

WHO ARE YOU????

6  NEXT TIME UPLOAD SOME PHOTOS, PLEASE.

Natalia Cases Torada 1ºA

                                                         MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM
       
                
                         
 Hello my name is Natalia.  This is my virtual bedroom. It`s very comfortable. Every wall is (in) a different colour.I love it.
In my room,there`s a big bed and bedside table next to it.There is a big wardrobe.I have got a TV in my room and a laptop. There is an alarm. My favourite thing in the room is (the) wardrobe and my bed.

Well done.  8

                  Clara Trejo 1ºA  " MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM"

 Hello, my name is Clara. My virtual bedrom is a median and organized.
 In my bedroom there is a table where I do the homework and study, there is a window overlooking the   street, there is a small table where (I keep) guard some books and (a) small box, there is big lamp haging from the          ceiling flower-shaped. (a flower-shaped big lamp)  In my free time I write in my personal diary that is on the table, the color (is) green water.

well done. 7

MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM

Hello. My name is Alfonso. My bedroom is very small but my bed is very

confortable. In my bedroom there are (is) one table and two chairs. In (it) she I

don't do my homewoork because I do (it) in my dining room. In my free time I am in it but only when it's summer because in winter it's very cold. The best of my bedroom are the views:   

Well done.  7

maria mendoza 2c an event

Hello my name is Maria (María), I'm thirteen years old. In August I went to the concert of Manuel Carrasco (Manuel Carrasco concert) in Merida (Mérida) in the month of August. I had a great time, I had to wait a long line to get in, but in the end I managed to get in. It was a concert (great concert) of ten

Ok 6. 

Next time please upload some photos to make it nicer.

Adrián Sánchez 2ºC ''At event''

              Last week it was my birthay. I have finally turned 13. It was on November 14, but I celebrated it on the 12th. We had dinner and then we went to the house of youth.

ok 6

You have to write more next time and please, upload some photos to make it nicer.

cefe aguilera calero 2C

I remember when I went to matalascañas last year boy (I go)  every year but that was different we went to more places we visited monuments from there (we) went to eat to more places we walked along the seafront we bought souvenirs from therey....
it is the beach that I like the most Huelva is quiet big there are many people

ok 6

Paula Fernandez. 2º-C AN EVENT

Hello my name is paula . Whent (when) I was in (class) sixth we went with (class) fifth of end of course to Granada three days. When we got on the bus I sat down with my best friend and the teachers told us who we were (to be with) going to touch in the room. I am (was) very happy I play (played) with my two best friends. The first day we went to the caves of Nerja and the beach.

Ok 6
Next time please upload some photos to make it nicer.

  My name is Josué and I do not know what to write. I can say what I'm going to do. I'm going to have to study today. Then I have to go to my music classes. It is very boring. We are going to be a long time. Last week, we had a concert, we played four songs. I do not know what I'm going to do tomorrow. Surely, I'll have math classes and then I'll go home. On Thursday, we have an exam of entrepreneurship initiative.

ok 7
Please, next time upload some photos.

Hello,my name is Angel,i've got a virtual bedroom,is very cool

AARON SANDEZ SAEZ

                                                               An Event                                                                                            When i went to madrid at school ,(I) not hod a great.In the hotel (everything was all fun) whas all very fun nights.(we went to) Were to aumusement park ,to te best stadium de football (footbal stadium)  Santiago Bernabeu,(it was) whas something fantastic.                          It was a fantastic experience that i will never forget .

ok 5

My personal profile (Pablo Alpiste 3ºC)

     My name´s Pablo and I´m fourteen years old . I live in Manchester with my parents and my sister , her name´s Marta . I go to IES ''Enrique Diez Canedo'' (...in Manchester??)

     My hobbies are cycling and fotball . I often practic (go) cycling and I often play fotball. My favourite mtb cyclist is Nino schurter and my favourite fotball palayer is Lionel Andres (Andrés)  Messi.

Ok. 7
Please WRITE MORE next time, ok?
 

Rosario García Chamizo 3ºESO-C

My name's Rosario and i'm fourteen years old.I live in Puebla de la Calzada with my mother and my brother and sister.I go to Ies Enrique Diez-Canedo secondary school.
I want to learn very (many) lenguages but (the) first (one) i want  (to) learn is korean with my sister and I want to travel a lot I think that is my dream because you can meet new people and new culture(s) so I think that's great.I want (to) go to university but no (not) in spain (Spain) in other site (a different place) maybe london or why not korea I can get a job there i don't know. I think  (it) is great (to) dream about the future. I want to study something about cameras and all that because I think it's great take (taking) photos and I want to do videos about what I learn about the word.My hobbies are music and see korean programmes. (It) is really cool is verry funny all of then (all of them are very funny) .My favourite groups in k-pop are twice,red velvet,bts,big bang,black pink....Well Goodbye thanks (for) to read  (reading) my personal profile.

Very well done.  9
 Please pay attention to all those grammar mistakes, and upload some photois to make it look nicer.

       Domingo Miño Redondo 3 C                      
                                                 
                                                        MY PERSONAL PROFILE


         My name´s  Domingo I´m fourteen years old .I live in Puebla de la calzada with my paarents         and my brother .I go to Enrique diez Canedo secundari school.
     
         My favouryte sports is (are)  karate and swimming .I love animals .
    I´ve got one dogs , hes´ve (he's got) got  brown hair.
    I play (go) swimming two time a days (twice a day),five days a weeek.

Ok. 6
Next time, please upload some photos.
       

MY PERSONAL PROFILE, by Ana M.

My name's Ana and I'm fifteen yeras old. I live in Lobón with my parents and my two brothers. I go to Enrique Díez Canedo Secondary School.
My hobbies are music and sports. I always listen to music in my bedroom. I aslo download songs onto my computer. My favourite singers are Melendi and Manolo García.

Ok.   6
Writer more next time.

THE PERSONAL PROFILE [SERGIO 3 ESO C]

        My name´s Sergio and I´m fourteen years old. I live in Puebla with my parents but (and)   my brother comes (at) the weekends. I go to school Enrique Díez Canedo (enrique díez-canedo school)

        My hobbies are swimming and play (playing) football. I (from) of mondays to fridays I go to the swimming pool. Some saturdays I an my club (me and my club) are going to the compete. I do not (I am not going to ...) play football anymore because I can not

Ok, 6
Next time, write more and upoload some photos

My personal profile. (Nerea Moreno Ruiz 3ºC)

My name is Nerea and I´m fourteen years old. I live in Puebla de la Calzada but I (am) from Madrid. I have got one brother and one sister. I go to secundary school Enrique Diez Canedo. (enrique díez-canedo secondary school)

My hobbies are photograph (photography) and watch (watching) YouTube videos. I really like listen (listening) to music. My favourites singers are  Dani Martin and Ed Sheeran. I like to stay (hang out) with my friends.

I like do (doing) sport. I do HIT and I play padel with my dad. I (would) love (to) travel  (will go) around the world. When I am older I (will go) around the world.

Well done.  7
Next time, please try to upload some photos to make it nicer.

MY VIRTUAL BEDROOM

                                         SAMUEL GUAYCHA PIÑERO                      
                                                          1ESO (B)
I'm Samuel and here is my "virtual bedroom".
It´s small but it´s beutiful.Every wall is blue .
There are two beds,two picture in 3D ,there is a window,a wordrobe, and a Real Madrid's picture.
My brother and I sleep in this bedroom.
I like my bedroom becouse it's beutiful and very confortable.

Well done. 7

Lucia Alvarez Gragera .

                                         An Event .❤                                                            

  Hello my name is Lucia (Lucía) .I   (am) years thirteen (years old).

  I have to to talk about  my trip to Granada.
 It was a five trip where we went sightseeing. 

We went to visit the best streets of Granada. 

 We had a great time but the trip was  very long. 
We hopped a big boat and then went in the Retiro park. 
This trip we realized (with) the students of 6 primary and 5 primary. 
We visited great monuments . And so was our trip to Granada .
                           
     Ok, 6