AN EVENT AROA 2ºC

 Hello! my name is Aroa,last week was halloween, (it) was a terrifying day, and a really fun time, we were many people.Me (I) had a great, because I was with my friends.The people that went in I was scared.We ate crumbs, the event lasted three days and sold nearly a thousand tickets.It was very great.

Ok, 6

Blanca Cabañas Arroyo : An event

                                                      MY TRIP TO MADRID❤
                  My name is Blanca , I`m twelve years old ,I`ll tell you how my trip to Madrid was.
             
            At 5:00 in the morning we had to be at the bus stop to arrive early to Madrid . Four hours later we arrived in Madrid and went to the Real Madrid stadium.After watching Santiago Bernabeu. Later we went to the hotel where we were to stay for 3 days and in the afternoon we went to visit the Prado museum.

During the last two days we were visiting places in Madrid that we did not know.

It was a marvelous trip

Very well done, 8


                          PHOTOS MADRID

AN EVENT AROA 2ºC

 Hello! my name is Aroa,last week was halloween, (it) was a terrifying day, and a really fun time, we were many people.Me (I) had a great, because I was with my friends.The people that went in I was scared.We ate crumbs, the event lasted three days and sold nearly a thousand tickets.It was very great.

Ok, 6

Paula Agudo (An Event)

Hello, my name is Paula. 3 years ago we went to Madrid in the tour final year (final year tour) with 6th grade students, who are now in 3rd of ESO,it was an (a) fantastic experience, I had a really good .(time)... Upon arrival in Madrid, we went to Santiago Bernabeu, and we were watching as it would be after the reforms. 

We also went to the Park of Europe, there we find (found) the Eiffel Tower, the Tower Bridge, etc ..

 We went to the park, I ride in a yellow boat, the tarantula, logs, etc...

Very well done, 8

Pablo Agudo 2'C

                                                                  My trip

Hello my name is Pablo and I am going to tell you a story about 3 years ago that we went to a very beautiful city in Spain.

One very special morning we got up for an end-of-course trip. Our first stop was in Nerja, and afterwards to the hotel, it was a very nice experience because we did not enjoy ourselves very well. I want to repeat the experience. What I liked the most was the Alhambra.

OK, 7

SHOPPING CENTRES

SHOPPING CENTRES

      I like going to the shopping centres because I love (buying) to buy things. In my town there are not any shopping centre, but in a city near my twn (in Badajoz) if there is one, El Faro.

      El Faro, is bigger than all the shops in my town. But is not it better, I like (going) to go to buy (with my friends?) my people, who buy elsewhere. Although El Faro is my favourite shopping centre.

      Most of all I'm going to the shopping centre El Faro, I like to go there.

Ok. 7... by the way, who told you about:  who?

What´s better / worse

                                       WHAT'S BETTER / WORSE
CITIES

The Japaneses, the Chineses and more people go to the Oporto. (it)  Is the place when the weather is very variable. I liked go to Oporto, because it was (is) excited.

· Oporto is more expensive than Santiago de Compostela.

· Oporto is smaller than Santiago de Compostela.

· Oporto has more tourists than Santiago de Compostela.

HOLIDAY DESTINATIONS                                                        

Other (some) foreigners go to Almería. 

· Almería has more hotels than Lugo.

· Almería is more luxurious than Lugo.

· Almería is bigger than Lugo.

SHOPPING CENTRES

· In Cáceres there are more shopping centres than (in)  Marvao.

· Cáceres is bigger than Marvao .

· Cáceres is more expensive than Marvao.

Ok, but this is supposed to be a writing, not just a seires of sentences. Remember "nationalities have NO plural"    8