MY HOUSE                            

Hello, I´m Pedro 1bc and here is my house.In my house there are some peoples in my family.There are three amazing bedrooms and three amazing bathrooms.I´ve got two posters.The posters are FC Barcelona and CF Villanovense.In the living room there is a betside (...) ,a pictures and a tv.There´s one pet.His (he is) a dog. THE END

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Hello, my name is Lidia. I will speak about my house Torremolinos, my beach house is of normal size, (it) has 13 rooms  (it has) having pantry, garage, bathrooms ... On the outside is white. My room is red and white. I have a pool at a patio which has beautiful sea views. The room my brother  (my brother's room) is green, beautiful color. That's all I do not want to roll up (I don't want to be boring) . Goodbye, thanks for your atecion (attention).

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Hello, In my house , there is a big living room , In my living room there is a big sofa and a good tv oposite (opposite) the sofa, there is (are three tables) a three tables in (the) a middle . In my house there (are some) is a stairs  and a corridor. There is a kitchen in a kitchen there is a table and (a) worktop. Next to the kitchen there is une (a) bedroom, but (it is used as an) the use of office. In the exit of the kitchen there is bathroom.Upstair in there (are)  is a three bedrroms and  (a) bathroom. My other one is. Other is for my brother and the last is for my parents.

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                                    MY HOUSE
My house is a (an) extraordinary house .
It`s a conch (shell) house , there is a pool.There are ten rooms ,three bathrooms ,four bedrooms two kitchen(s) and a big living room.
My bedroom is big there are three posters ,my bed is small and white . The pool is a big saltwater pool  (It) IS VERY BEUTIFUL !
There are twenty windows 

My house is very beutiful .I love my house. 

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                                               My House

       My house is amazing.It has got six rooms.
         In my bathroom there is a long white bath.
         In the second room,the kitchen,there is a table,some chairs,four
 white walls,etc.
         Near the kitchen,(it) is my sister's bedroom.(it) Is beatiful (beautiful).
         Next to my sister's bedroom,(it) is the living room.There is an amazing TV,three sofas and two table (tables).
         On the left of the living room, (it) is my bedroom.(it) Is my favourite part.There are two beds,one wardrobe,one door ,etc.
         Next to my bedroom,(it) is my parent's bedroom.
         )it)Is beatiful (beautiful) and big.There is a bed,bedside,there are some mirrow and a window.

         In my house,there's a garage and patio too.Good bye.

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MY HOUSE

My house is very big and enormous. It has two bathrooms, and three bedrooms and a patio very very big.

In my house  (we) lives (live) two persons (people) and a dog (it´s (its) name is Golfo).In my house there (are some) is a stairs,it has a livingroom ,a diningroom and a garage.

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