MY HOUSE

My house is large (big) (it) has two floors 9 windows and 8 rooms. (It) Also has a garage and a garden very big (a very big garden). I love my house.



 

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 MY ROUTINE

I'm Irene.I live in Puebla de la Calzada.I get up at 7:30a.m and I (have) breakfast. (After that) after I (get) ready up to go to high school.I go to  high school at 8:10 I (come) back home and I (have) lunch at 2.35 I listen to music and do my homeworks at 4:30.I have a shower at 7:30 or 8:00 and at 8:30 I eat the dinner and at 10:20 I go to sleep.

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PROFILE PERSONAL

Hello my name is Alejandro I (am) twelve years old. I live in Lobón (Badajoz). In my free time I play football and play the computer games. (At) Whit the night I (have)dinner, watch TV (Gym Tony) and (I) go to bed at quarter to eleven.

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MY REAL HOME

     The house in which I live is very large (big), and at the same time ¡great! In my house lives four persons, and my dog (we live 4 people...).

     There are fifteen rooms in it, (without) not counting the patio and the terrace. The specials rooms in my house are the gym and the library. In the gym I have a big elastic matand (?) sports equipment, in the library I have a lot of books.

     We have three balconies, one in the other room of my parents, my brother and finally in mine. One thing that I find great is that my bedroom is the largest of all.

     In the patio, there is a swimming pool, and many posts and plants, ¡is it (it is) very nice!

MY HOUSE IS MY FAVOURITE WITH RESPECT TO THE OTHER PEOPLE´S HOUSES.

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           Hello! My name is Daniel and I'm from Puebla de la Calzada in Spain. I'm twelve years old and my birthday is in July.

            I get up at 7:30. After school I go home and I have lunch. Then I do my homework. I go to the bed at quarter past eleven.
            I love video games. I play scoccer (soccer) with my friends.

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MY ROUTINE

Hello! My name is Jairo,I'm twelve years old, I live in Barbaño, my daily routine is:

In the morning I get up at 7:15, (I) get dressed to go to school where (I) they study, then I go to (have) breakfast with my brother Jesus (Jesús) at 7:30, then I go to the bathroom to wash my face teeth and comb my hair to go to school.

In the evening I do my homework and review (what the teachers) explained in high school, then I will tutoring and finally I play with my friends

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Hi!My name is Mario and I live in Puebla de la Calzada(Badajoz)
I'm twelve years old and I would like an e-friend because (it) is funny.

I get up at 7:00 a.m.,then, I have breakfast.I go to school at 8:00 a.m.,after,I do my homeworks and then (I) study.I go to bed at 11:00p.m.

I like go (going) for a walk with my family, I love the basketball and I hate play (playing) football.

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My name is Pelayo.I live in Puebla de la Calzada.I´m twelve years old.In my free time I watch TV, play football with my friend Samu.After I have dinner and I go (to) sleep.

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My routine

My name is Alejandro, I live in Barbaño, I'm twelve years old .My routine is very monotonous.I get up at seven o'clock, I have brekfast and I get dress.I go to school at eight o'clock.I left school at half past two, and I do my homeworks.

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